What other kids said about "After the Great Fire"

(Note: Kids' spelling & grammar has been corrected)


soujanya, age 8 yrs

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

they knew it will make things worse.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Sararuma knew there was nothing else to say.

soujanya's Comments:

i liked it.


Janki, age 35 years

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Because they saw the complete destruction of life and had realised that it was useless trying to convince anybody for peace.So they saved themselvs for a new beginning.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Sararuma was evil and evil thoughts can never survive where there is hope and positivity of thoughts.

Janki's Comments:

The story motivates a person to be positive and hopeful in any condition.


lily, age 10

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

because they did not want to die

lily's Comments:

average


himan 11215, age 18

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

so they didn't die

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

mmmmm

himan 11215's Comments:

it was good in a way


liz, age 11

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They did not want to fight in the terrible battle.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

He was evil.

liz's Comments:

It has a great lesson and I really enjoyed reading the story.


Kayla , age 11

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Because they wanted to survive rather than fight.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because there was more hope and he thives on anger and hate.

Kayla 's Comments:

I thought it taught a lesson so more little kids should read it.


Sally, age 7

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Um, i'm not sure.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

He was a bad guy.

Sally's Comments:

It was weird.


, age

's Comments:

I thought it was nice. :)


, age

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

they hated each other

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

she was mean

's Comments:

i thought it was bad


Jerome, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They loved each other

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Cause no one else was fighting

Jerome's Comments:

it wasnt as good as the title FAIL


Elizabeth, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They probably thought someone was behind the fighting and went to hide instead of taking sides. They were right.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

His power was shrinking because they man and his wife were rebeling against him and telling him things will change. They were right and the wizard turned to dust

Elizabeth's Comments:

It was ok, but you need a legend about a Chimera. But anyway it was awesome.


Austin Steed, age 10

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They did not what to fight.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

He was very mad, and so mad he turned into dust.

Austin Steed's Comments:

I think it was a great story. I really like the part how the fire destroyed the land.


katie, age 8

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

they were scared

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

she lied

katie's Comments:

i lked it


, age

's Comments:

i think this story is LAME!!!!!!!


, age 12

's Comments:

That was a funny and outlandish story.


Ashley, age 12

Ashley's Comments:

it's nice


, age

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

BECAUSE he went to battle to save his country.


jenni, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

because they said that they didn't have to die and that they wanted to die

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

sararuma said that they were going to die of hunger in his deathbed of dust and ashes

jenni's Comments:

my thought about the story is that it was great and interesting but it needed more details


PORNIKA, age 9

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

THE COUPLE HID BECAUSE THEY SENSED THAT WITH THE WAR RAGING EVERY MOMENT. BOTH THE SIDES WOULD END UP DESTROYED.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

SARAUMA TURNED TO DUST BECAUSE HE WAS THE CREATOR OF THE DRAUGHT. SO IF THE WHEN THE OLD COUPLE STARTED PLANTING THEN DEFINITELY SARARUMA WOULD BE DEMOLISHED. SO HE TURNED TO DUST BEFOREHAND.

PORNIKA's Comments:

DEAR WHOOTIE, PLEASE BE SENSIBLE. THIS IS NOT A STORY OF KINGS AND QUEENS, BUT A REALLY MIND BLOWING BOOK.


nick, age 10

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They didn't want to fight.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

He was wrong.

nick's Comments:

I liked this story.


Somebody, age 15

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They hid instead of taking sides because they did not want to end up destroyed.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Sararuma turned to dust because the man and woman were saying a lot of positive thoughts and he was a negative, evil being.

Somebody's Comments:

It's alright, not exactly adventurous but many lessons can be learned from this story.


jaeshone, age oliver

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

because they did not want to die because they were killing each other, if one was on one side the other would kill the other and one was on the other they would kill the other one.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because of the fire.

jaeshone's Comments:

The story was really good.


Heyyy, age 83

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

So they wouldn't die.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Cause there was good.

Heyyy's Comments:

Good


, age

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

so they would live

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

because everything turned green

's Comments:

it was good


Marilyn, age 11

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

So they can be spared.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

He turned into dust because there were survivors and they were going to try and rebuild and regrow everything and he didn't expect that to happen.

Marilyn's Comments:

I thought it was a thoughtful story.


keyona, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Because they wanted to live there but the evil man wouldn't let them because he said that they were going to die si=o they instead fought in the battle so they can live there.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because they had proven their point and the lived there 4ever.

keyona's Comments:

I thought it was kind of lame because there is no action and the setting sounds kinda of boring but overall great story, Whootie.


danny, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Because if they fought they too would have been destroyed.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because he was evil and as he tried to kill all of the human race he did not want to hear good things.

danny's Comments:

It was AWESOME.


Chris, age 10

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

So they didn't get killed.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

All the plants were growing back.

Chris's Comments:

I liked it.


Ricardo, age 8

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

So she would be safe.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because it was old.

Ricardo's Comments:

It was awesome.


danial, age 21

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Because war leads to destruction, and they didn't want that.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Probably because trickery was what kept him alive. Since he failed to trick the two people, he began to die and turned to dust.

danial's Comments:

ok


Sruthy, age 11

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

The man and his wife didn't take sides in the battle because they didn't want to get involved in the battle and die.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Sararuma turned into dust because he knew he was defeated.

Sruthy's Comments:

I think this is a very good and humorous story. Thank You


Cheese, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They didn't want to get involved with the war, or anything else that was happening on the surface.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

They broke his faith in destroying mankind.

Cheese's Comments:

It was magnificent :D


eggs, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

So they won't die.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because he got shot.

eggs's Comments:

It was great.


christopher, age 9

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Because they could die.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

She was so worried.

christopher's Comments:

I thought it was exciting.


jasper, age 12

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They didnt want to burn up and die.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because everything was coming back to life.

jasper's Comments:

It was a good story but it would of been better if there were pictures.


alexis, age 15

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

Because they didn't want to die. They wanted to live so they decided to make a little safe place so they can hide. And they lived after all the fire, destruction and horror that was happening.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because everybody has to die some day.

alexis's Comments:

Well, I thought that the story was really intersting. I really enjoyed reading it. It was the best!


KRIT, age 9

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

N/A

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

N/A

KRIT's Comments:

DEAR WHOOTIE, I LIKED YOUR STORY BECAUSE IT HAD A LOT OF IDEAS AND A LOT OF DETAILS AND HAD INTERESTING WORDS. IT WAS SUPRISING.


Tyler, age 11

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They hid because they knew after the fight was over, many people would be dead, and they did'nt want to die.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

He turned to dust beacause life was starting to come back.

Tyler's Comments:

Well, it was ok, I guess...nothing I would really fancy though...


Richard, age 15

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

There was a great fire.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because the woman started to plant seeds.

Richard's Comments:

Very interesting of what will happen next.


Lilian, age 9

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

They wanted peace settled down in the war.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

He was proven wrong for everything he had done and said. Maybe the man and his wife had broken a spell.

Lilian's Comments:

It was excellent. I really enjoyed it.


janelle, age 5

Why did the man and his wife hide instead of taking sides in the battle?

So they won't die.

Why did Sararuma turn to dust?

Because he was shot.

janelle's Comments:

Nothing.



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