SOUJANYA, age 9

SOUJANYA's Comments:

I LIKED IT

Cade, age 9

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

if the bride starsts lying something goas wrong you know she lying

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

i liked a girl and she liked me and and she said to a boy she like him and then she said to him i don't like you and she said to me i like you not him.

Cade's Comments:

i liked it a lot and i liked the illusttation liked the writing it was inspiring

lily, age 9

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

to be a good wife

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

i hate to share things in public

lily's Comments:

hey..owl make better stories

manmeet?, age 7?

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

she speak to me

, age

's Comments:

I think is more for mature audiences than for little children. I really didn't like it. I will stay with the original version.

M, age 11

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

so they could amrry him i think

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

uh........ no

M's Comments:

ok it's basically a book i already read called the "Little Fire Fly"

, age

's Comments:

Great story!

Brandon Fulton, age 15

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

He wanted a wife that he could trust.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

My cousin lied to me when I asked him for my money. He said that he didn't have it.

Brandon Fulton's Comments:

I think it was great, but not better than Cinderella.

CCALCC, age 7

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

It would be hard to stay married to a wife that was dishonest. He wanted to stay married forever. A dishonest wife might hurt him, break his heart.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

My sister promised to play Barbies if I helped her clean the room. I helped her but she didn't play Barbies. My dad promised me $2 if I helped clean the yard. I cleaned the yard and he gave me $3. I probably won't believe my sister next time, but I will believe my father. I'll help my father but not my sister.

CCALCC's Comments:

It was good. It was cool. It was lovable. It was embarrassing because I had to play Strong Wind.

Margaret, VA, age 7

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

He would know that she could do what she said she could do. An honest woman would make a good wife.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

My friend lied to me about having a special toy. He wanted to impress me. When I asked to play with his toy, he told me the truth.

Margaret, VA's Comments:

I think it was very, very good except for the end about the stars.

Emily, age 7

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

He does not want a wife that uses him just to be popular.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

My friend's parents are really strict and so when my friend Rebecca told me she has a boyfriend I didn't believe her. My friend Sean got a puppy and he was jumping all over the classroom and smiling like a hyena so I knew he was telling the truth..

Emily's Comments:

I like it for no certain reason :)

Georgia, age 14

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

Because honesty is a good quality.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I felt really bad and hurt that someone would lie to me for a stupid reason. I felt glad that someone was honest with me.

Georgia's Comments:

I like the story alot. ^_^

, age

's Comments:

I think it was good!

brianna, age 10

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

becaus if they dont tell the truth he would get really mad.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

once my mom said that she was not going to spend my money but she did it anyway.

brianna's Comments:

i loved the story exept for the bad things that happened.

alison, age 10

alison's Comments:

It was well done.

Emma, age 10

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

Otherwise the bride would be untruthful and untrustworty which is not fair on the husband.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I knew someone was lying to me because I already knew the truth.

Emma's Comments:

U think it is a really good story.

Trevor Schulz, age 11

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

Because he wanted a bride that would be kind and always speak the truth.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

One time when someone was lying to me, they made this certain face that he always makes when he is lying. When my friend was telling the truth I knew because I saw it, too. but he didn't know it.

Trevor Schulz's Comments:

I thought it was very interesting because I liked to hear another perspective of Cinderella.

Jenny, age 8

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

He likes people that are truthful.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

Someone lied that he heard what me and my friends were saying. He told the truth when he said he didn't hear what we were saying since he told the truth we told him what we were saying.

Jenny's Comments:

I thought it was great and it taught me two lessons: never lie and what matters is the inside not the outside.

kirsten, age 11

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

It will make your dream come true sometimes if you tell the truth it will give you a better chance.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

My friend lied to me by saying something that was a lie and then a year went by and then she told the truth ans said that she lied to me and said she was joking or lying.

kirsten's Comments:

It was a good story to teach people why to tell the truth it will teach readers to not lie and why it is good to be honest.

Terryn, age 10

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

It is so importent to Strong Wind that his bride told the truth so he could actually have a wife or as they say it, bride.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

My cousin Faith is about 4 or 5 and she lied to me when I asked her if she hit her sister. A time when someone was telling the truth is when I asked if they wanted to play with me and they said not really.

Terryn's Comments:

I liked the story.

ridda, age 12

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

Because he was the brother of her.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I would ask wy you lied to me.

ridda's Comments:

I think the story teaches us never to lie or nobody will believe you or maybe never ever lie.

cetavia, age 8

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

I like to READ.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I BET THEM UP.

cetavia's Comments:

IT WAS A GOOD STORY.

shiela, age 5

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

because...........it is bad if she dont tell the truth.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I think I will be angry. I think I will be happy.

shiela's Comments:

I learned that it is bad when you are lying.

Shyan & Shamary, age 8 & 5

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

It was important because Strong Wind is honest and wants a bride that does not lie.

Shyan & Shamary's Comments:

We loved the story soooooo much, we wish there was more stories like this. thank you :)

river, age 10

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

Because if his wife lies, he will never know if she is ever telling the truth. And if a person lies once they will lie again.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I knew when my cousin was lying because she said I do not know where your lucky bracelet is. But I found it under my bed.

river's Comments:

I think the story was exciting. Keep on going, Whootie Owl.

Cynthia, age 12

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

He wanted someone who would tell the truth because he didn't want to live with a lying wife. And besides, if she lied before they got married, who knows what she will do after they're married?

Cynthia's Comments:

I liked this story because I've heard it cinderella so many times in so many different versions and I just love this story...so I like all the alterations done to it, it is very good.

ello chum, age ???????????

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

Cause she's a person.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

Ello chum!!!!!

ello chum's Comments:

cheese

sabs, age 11

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

I like this but I want puppet shows.

edith, age 72

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

Because it was.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

Don't remember.

edith's Comments:

It was good.

, age

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

He wanted his wife to be truthful to him as the wife should always remain truthful to the husband.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I knew someone is lying by the look of their faces and the look of their eyes and feeling I know they are telling the truth.

's Comments:

I find the story fantastic as it is very detailed.

Mrs Stauss Class, age 3rd grade

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

It is important to tell the truth.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

I was happy.

Mrs Stauss Class's Comments:

Thumbs up. We liked the story.

Jessica, age 10

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

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Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

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Jessica's Comments:

It was o.k but i kept on losing my place by scrolling down

Jade, age 5

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

He wanted the truth because he didn't want to marry someone who was untruthful in case they told the wrong answer when he asked a question.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

Never known anyone to lie to me. I know when they have a truthful look on their face - they don't have this little snigger. It feels very good when someone is telling the truth.

Jade's Comments:

I liked it because she telled the truth.

DANNIELLE , age 13

Why was it so important to Strong Wind that his bride tell the truth?

BECAUSE TRUTH IS EVERYTHING.

Tell about what happened when you knew someone was lying to you. Tell about another time when you knew someone was telling you the truth.

WELL, MY BOYFRIEND TOLD ME HE WASN'T CHEATING BUT HE WAS. MY DAD LOVES ME

DANNIELLE 's Comments:

WHATEVER.