vivian, age 12 Did you ever No Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened No vivian's Comments: i do not understand the story
vivian, age 12
Did you ever
No
Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened
vivian's Comments:
i do not understand the story
Maya, age 11 Did you ever One day my brother ran out the door to go catch the icecream truck without a adult or me and he is only four so I had to go running after him to nake sure he wouldn't get hurt. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened One day I walked down the street with my friends not knowing that it was dinner time. My older brother had to come catch me before all of the food was gone. Maya's Comments: The story was well written and I really like it.
Maya, age 11
One day my brother ran out the door to go catch the icecream truck without a adult or me and he is only four so I had to go running after him to nake sure he wouldn't get hurt.
One day I walked down the street with my friends not knowing that it was dinner time. My older brother had to come catch me before all of the food was gone.
Maya's Comments:
The story was well written and I really like it.
Maya, age 11 Did you ever One day my brother ran out the door to go catch the ice cream truck without a adult or me and he is only four, so I had to go running after him to make sure he wouldn't get hurt. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened One day I walked down the street with my friends not knowing that it was dinner time. My older brother had to come catch me before all of the food was gone. Maya's Comments: The story was well written and I really liked it.
One day my brother ran out the door to go catch the ice cream truck without a adult or me and he is only four, so I had to go running after him to make sure he wouldn't get hurt.
The story was well written and I really liked it.
Christopher, age 11 Did you ever No. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened Yes, because I was going to break my cousin's glasses because I got mad at him but my other cousin say don't because I was going to get in trouble. Christopher's Comments: I kinda got lost in the middle part of it but I still thought it was fun to read!
Christopher, age 11
No.
Yes, because I was going to break my cousin's glasses because I got mad at him but my other cousin say don't because I was going to get in trouble.
Christopher's Comments:
I kinda got lost in the middle part of it but I still thought it was fun to read!
ALDAIR, age 11 Did you ever No. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened No. ALDAIR's Comments: The story was really interesting.
ALDAIR, age 11
ALDAIR's Comments:
The story was really interesting.
, age 012 Did you ever NO, I never fetched anyone. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened No because I never fetched them. 's Comments: Whootie, I felt like the story was really great. It's really entertaining.
, age 012
NO, I never fetched anyone.
No because I never fetched them.
's Comments:
Whootie, I felt like the story was really great. It's really entertaining.
francisco, age 11 Did you ever No. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened No. francisco's Comments: I thought it was an interesting story.
francisco, age 11
francisco's Comments:
I thought it was an interesting story.
hannah, age Did you ever um..........no Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened yes my mom told me not to quit the reading bowl hannah's Comments: it was good and very long
hannah, age
um..........no
yes my mom told me not to quit the reading bowl
hannah's Comments:
it was good and very long
Emilia , age 11 Did you ever No, I never saw anybody that went astray but if I did, i would help them. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened I never went astrAy. Emilia 's Comments: I thought the story was long but had meaning.
Emilia , age 11
No, I never saw anybody that went astray but if I did, i would help them.
I never went astrAy.
Emilia 's Comments:
I thought the story was long but had meaning.
almalinda, age Did you ever my little sister cleaning the dishes wrong. I helped her. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened When my mom gave me my homework. almalinda's Comments: It was a good poem.
almalinda, age
my little sister cleaning the dishes wrong. I helped her.
When my mom gave me my homework.
almalinda's Comments:
It was a good poem.
alfredo, age 12 Did you ever No. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened Don't remember when, but yes. alfredo's Comments: I didnt get a lot, but it's good.
alfredo, age 12
Don't remember when, but yes.
alfredo's Comments:
I didnt get a lot, but it's good.
caroline, age 11 Did you ever My friend was going to do something really dangerous and I said not to. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened Yes, one time I was going to jump off my trampoline and she told me not to. caroline's Comments: It was ok.
caroline, age 11
My friend was going to do something really dangerous and I said not to.
Yes, one time I was going to jump off my trampoline and she told me not to.
caroline's Comments:
It was ok.
daizja, age Did you ever No, I don't know anybody that went astray but if they did, I would retrace their steps and find them. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened I never went astray. daizja's Comments: I thought the story was really interseting and took a lot of thought but the story was really long.
daizja, age
No, I don't know anybody that went astray but if they did, I would retrace their steps and find them.
I never went astray.
daizja's Comments:
I thought the story was really interseting and took a lot of thought but the story was really long.
, age AMANDA Did you ever Yes, I helped my friend Millie. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened One time I hit somebody. My mom told me what to do next. (I was 6.) 's Comments: I LOVED IT!!!
, age AMANDA
Yes, I helped my friend Millie.
One time I hit somebody. My mom told me what to do next. (I was 6.)
I LOVED IT!!!
Alexis, age 11 Did you ever When my little brother was going to jump off the roof of a house I told him not to because he could hurt himself. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened No. Alexis's Comments: I thougth it was good.
Alexis, age 11
When my little brother was going to jump off the roof of a house I told him not to because he could hurt himself.
Alexis's Comments:
I thougth it was good.
d, age Did you ever Yes, they were talking during a test. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened Yes, I was messing with my fingernails. d's Comments: It was somewhat interesting.
d, age
Yes, they were talking during a test.
Yes, I was messing with my fingernails.
d's Comments:
It was somewhat interesting.
Austin, age 10 Austin's Comments: i think it was very scary.
Austin, age 10
Austin's Comments:
i think it was very scary.
Nealey, age 12 Did you ever I do not understand. Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened Yes. Long story. Nealey's Comments: I thought it was very advanced and enjoyed the plot very much.
Nealey, age 12
I do not understand.
Yes. Long story.
Nealey's Comments:
I thought it was very advanced and enjoyed the plot very much.
abigail, age 8 Did you ever no Did anyone ever fetch you back when you went astray? Tell what happened no abigail's Comments: i thought it's too childish.
abigail, age 8
no
abigail's Comments:
i thought it's too childish.
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