Kevin, age 18

Could Luis have helped his sister without the condor, the old man, and the flamingo? Why did the condor, the old man, and the flamingo help Luis?

They helped because he needed a torch to defeat the witch.

Did you ever try to do something hard for someone else and other people helped you do it?

Yes is was very difficult.

Kevin's Comments:

This story is different from a story that I heard about Hansel and Gretel.

Yi Ling, age 13+

Could Luis have helped his sister without the condor, the old man, and the flamingo? Why did the condor, the old man, and the flamingo help Luis?

He couldn't have done it all by himself. The condor,the old man and the flamingo helped Luis because they thought he was a brave and kind boy.

Did you ever try to do something hard for someone else and other people helped you do it?

No.

Yi Ling's Comments:

I loved the story! It tells us that siblings shouldn't fight or quarrel so often and should treat each other with love and respect.

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's Comments:

i thought it was very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very BORING!

Sarah, age 10

Could Luis have helped his sister without the condor, the old man, and the flamingo? Why did the condor, the old man, and the flamingo help Luis?

They helped him because the condor told him what to do and the old man gave him fire.

Did you ever try to do something hard for someone else and other people helped you do it?

Maybe, I'm not so sure.

Sarah's Comments:

I think this is a very good story because it is very exciting. And you really want to know what will happen next.

Britany, age 11

Could Luis have helped his sister without the condor, the old man, and the flamingo? Why did the condor, the old man, and the flamingo help Luis?

No he didn't, no I don't.

Did you ever try to do something hard for someone else and other people helped you do it?

yah

Britany's Comments:

I like it.

TP, age 10

Could Luis have helped his sister without the condor, the old man, and the flamingo? Why did the condor, the old man, and the flamingo help Luis?

He could not have saved his sister without the other's help. They helped him because they knew his sister was in great peril.

Did you ever try to do something hard for someone else and other people helped you do it?

Yes. I tried to find a present for my friend and my family helped me.

TP's Comments:

It was ok but not the best.

leena, age 13

Did you ever try to do something hard for someone else and other people helped you do it?

i do not remember

leena's Comments:

i thought that this story is very great

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's Comments:

The story is good and interesting.I like the part where Natalia tried to catch the ball and then she followed it...