What other kids said about "Sunlight and Moonlight"

(Note: Kids' spelling & grammar has been corrected)


PRASHANTI, age 7

PRASHANTI's Comments:

I LOVE IT


quanna, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Because they loved each other.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?




quanna's Comments:

It was really good story and I liked it.


Corey, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The girl cared for the prince when they were about to die. The king cared about the queen when she was about to dye. The hermit cared about sunlight and Moonlight

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my brother almost fell over because he got a nerve in his shoulder.



Corey's Comments:

The story was great because they all lived happily ever after.


chris rudd, age 15

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The princess cared for the prince when he was about to be ed. The hermit cared about the two boys. The king cared about queen when she was about to dye.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped mario when his hand was hurt.



chris rudd's Comments:

I liked it but it had too much evil.


kamilah r, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The king was worried about his son. They did not want to . The queen wanted the boy's heart so she could live.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Paid his fine. Help my dad wynn he was in jail and my dad as dan all he cando to Ilove my dad very much he put in a home when my mom put me ont but nomat what i seal love her because she as dan all she can do.



kamilah r's Comments:

It was a very good story.


Corderro, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight told the captors his brother was dead. When the princees asked the king to release sunlight. When the king offered the father a position in the palace.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My grandmother, I helped clean up.



Corderro's Comments:

I thought it was a pretty interesting story.


ladedra, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

There was the daddy and the princess.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I would run and never come back.



ladedra's Comments:

I thought that it was sad.


ron, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the dad cared about his son, when the princess cared about sunlight, when the bears cared about the princess and sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried that someone might get an "f" on a test so I helped them.



ron's Comments:

I thought it was very interesting.


Deon, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The beautiful princess cared about the lovely prince and cared about the younger sister.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped an old women rake her leaves.



Deon's Comments:



Ashley, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

One time was when the princess' elder daughter was getting married.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my mom had surgery and I helped her and stayed at home with her.



Ashley's Comments:

It's good.


jim, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the princess and sunlight went to the dungeon.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I tried to call the police.



jim's Comments:

I thought it was very fun for kids.


keyauna, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The princess tried to set the stranger free, the bears said that they wouldn't eat flesh anymore, and the king had begun to love his son-in-law, and that's why he gave up his crown.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I tried to say that I did it and that person didn't.



keyauna's Comments:

I kind of liked it but not a lot.


Mallory, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the princess cared for the stranger, when the denom-bears felt sorry for the princess and the stranger, and when the princess went back to the palace after her father casted them into the denom-bears.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I prayed for my sister when she got sick.



Mallory's Comments:

I thought it was a good story because it tells a lesson about thinking about what you do first before you do it.


Damian, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the princess went to the dungeon for the stranger. The bears cared about the princess. The princess and the sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my friend clean his house before his mother came home.



Damian's Comments:

I liked it.


Lisa, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the young man and the princess were in the cave before the bears came in. When the king gave up his crown to his son in law. And when the bears let the young man and the princess out of the sacks.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my brother needed some money.



Lisa's Comments:

I thought it was a good story.


Demarcus, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When they didn't want the bears to them. When the Queen wanted the king's son ed and her son told the king's son. When he told him to go to the old man house.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my brother was in trouble I got him out.



Demarcus's Comments:

I kind of liked the story.


Orlando, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The queen was telling a story that the Khan son was going to make her drink his blood. When the hermit took then in. When the queen son found his brother a wife.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I try to help them, and I pray that they can be helped.



Orlando's Comments:

I liked the story because the Khan was the best person.


Tova, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the bears said they didn't want to eat them.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When the king's son was worried about his stepbrother.



Tova's Comments:

I think it was a good story. It was kind of scary.


Davetta, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

1. When Moonlight cared about his brother enough to tell him what his mother and and his step father was going to do. 2.When Sunlight cared so much about his brother that he told the soldiers that he was in order to save his life.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I told my mother because it was my brother.



Davetta's Comments:

It was GREAT!!!


Katrina, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The king cared about his son and he wouldn't kill his son to give his wife the blood from his heart.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Well I help them solve their problem and if they don't like that idea we try another one and the problem might work out.



Katrina's Comments:

Well Whootie Owl I enjoyed your story I don't know about the other kids the part I liked was when the princess was going to die.


Tony, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

At the beginning in the middle and at the end.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Gave them money.



Tony's Comments:



Rapheal, age

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight's father and his stepbrother moonlight loved him dearly. Moonlight cared for sunlight. Sunlight's father cared for him.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I took the blame.



Rapheal's Comments:

It was a good story it was very interesting.


chevra, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight's father did not want to kill his son. When the princess cared for the bears. When the princess cared for the old man.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

The time when I helped my grandmother.



chevra's Comments:

I thought the story was great!


corderell, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The boy told the man that his brother was dead. The princess wanted to save the boy. The king was going to kill his son for his son.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

A time when I was worried about someone else is when I heard that my friend got shot. I went to the hospital and bought him candy.



corderell's Comments:

I thought Whootie Owl was a good story and I enjoyed it.


, age

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight had died. When moonlight had wanted to live with the princess.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

They help me.



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Donnell, age

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight's father and his stepbrother, Moonlight, loved him dearly. The Khan was beside himself watching her.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When I was worried about somebody it was my daddy's birthday.



Donnell's Comments:

It was very interesting.


Konshela, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The first time someone cared about someone else was when the queen wanted to the princes and his stepbrother went and told him. The second time someone cared about someone else was when Moonlight wanted to go with his stepbrother and help along his

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

A time when I was worried about someone else I tried to help them by doing everything possible and praying for them.



Konshela's Comments:

I thought the story Sunlight and Moonlight was very sweet and heart warming. It also sounds nice to read mainly to little children.


Consuela, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight's mother had died and all he had was his father. The daughter's father said that she cared about the stranger. His father had cared about his two sons.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Sunlight was worried about his mother.



Consuela's Comments:

It's when the king put his daughter in that cave with the bear.


Melvin, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The princess cared about sunlight. Moonlight cared about sunlight. And the kahn cared about the princess.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I talk to them to make them feel better.



Melvin's Comments:

I thought it was great.


adrian, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The two brothers cared for each other. When they ran away, the hermit cared for the two boys. Sunlight and the princess cared for each other.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When I helped my sister. I took her in the house.



adrian's Comments:

I thought it was .


Tristan, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the brother and sister liked each other.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I help my dad do something to the house.



Tristan's Comments:

I thought it was funny and fun.


chris, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight and moonlight run away their father wanted them back.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

If I help someone it would because I am helpful.



chris's Comments:



Katerina, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The three things are that the Khan's wife wantd to Moonlight because she wanted Sunlight to have things to himself, but one day Sunlight heard what his mother had to say and told Moonlight what was going on so they left and went to a desert and came

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I went and told someone.



Katerina's Comments:

Whootie, I liked the story.


Lonnie, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

There are three times.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

It was a girl, her boyfriend was going to hit her so I stopped him and hit him in the face.



Lonnie's Comments:

I thought it was a good story.


ranata, age 15

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.


Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Yesterday my little baby was sick and I am going to see him.



ranata's Comments:

I liked your story.


andrew, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The two brothers cared for each other. The princess cared for moonlight. The mother cared for sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my mom's friend from her boyfriend.



andrew's Comments:

I think it was pretty nice and I liked it.


michael, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the woman was trying to get sunlight's father to him and take his heart so that her son could be the prince. Moonlight told sunlight that his father was going to take his heart out and then he told sunlight to run away he was very sad.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried about my cousin he had a wreck with me and my sister and I took up for him by telling his mom that he was not going fast.



michael's Comments:



patrick, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When he told the men his brother was already dead, when the girl told the king not to kill the boy, and when the boy told his brother his own father was going to kill him.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When I knew my friend's mother was going to get him about something I told her I did it.



patrick's Comments:

I liked it because it should some happen each other.


Andrea, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Sunlight saved Moonlight by telling the soldier that his brother was dead, and when the princess saved Sunlight by trying begging her father not to kill him, and when the king did not kill Sunlight and the princess.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my brother did something real bad, I lied to keep him out of trouble.



Andrea's Comments:



Ethan, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight and moonlight ran away, their father wanted them back because he loved them. When the soldiers came to take Sunlight and Moonlight away, unlight told them that Moonlight was dead, to save his brother. When Sunlight and Moonlight got married

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My dad had a wreck on his bike and hurt his elbow bad, I put a bandage on it. I ran to get help from a grown person, and told that person what had happened.



Ethan's Comments:

It was a pretty cool fairy tale.


Crystal, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

First when Sunlight went to get help. Second when the princess helped Sunlight. Third when Sunlight helped the princess get out of the bag.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I ran to get help from a grown person, and told that person what had happen.



Crystal's Comments:

Well Whootie! I loved it. It was so interesting. And to be honest this was the story I ever read. SO BYE BYE


milton, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the queen was sick. When the king's son ran away. When the kids were in the desert.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my mom clean the outhouse.



milton's Comments:

I like the story because it was cool.


Jason, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight told the princess he should die, not her. When the princess told sunlight he should die, not her. When moonlight told sunlight about his father wanting to kill him.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My mom's boyfriend was sick and he was coughing and I went and asked if he needed medicine or some help.



Jason's Comments:

I liked the story because they had good characters and a good setting.


jarvis, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When she was sick he said I'll get you anything you need. And when he said he was going to trick her and get a goat's heart. Then when sunlight and the princess were in the bear's dungeon.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my mother when she needed some gas money and when my dad gave me my allowance I gave her some money.



jarvis's Comments:

I like the story because his stepmother was wicked and he ran away.


Jamar, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The part when sunlight had been captured by the captain and moonlight tried to help.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my brother almost drowned and I went to tell my mother.



Jamar's Comments:

I thought the story was good because it was funny.


Brandie, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Moonlight cared for his brother Sunlight. When the hermit cared for Sunlight and Moonlight. When the princess cared for the life of Sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When I was babysitting this little boy he snuck outside and got stuck in a tree that he had climbed and I had to climb it and get him down.



Brandie's Comments:

I thought that the story was very interesting.


Jonathan, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When moonlight cared for his brother sunlight. When sunlight cared for the princess. When the princess cared for sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I told his mom to take him to the hospital.



Jonathan's Comments:

I think it was a very good story and I liked how the young boy was very brave. I think he deserved to become the king.


leterica, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When moonlight's brother was going to get killed and when the king was going to get killed.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

This time when my mom was in a fight and she needed help and I called the police and they came over there in a mint and she got the help that she wanted.



leterica's Comments:

I thought the story was good and it showed a lot of kindness and a lot of caring about people so that is why I like the story.


Akio, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

1.When the Khan was worried about Sunlight. 2.When the Khan was worried about Moonlight. 3.When the stranger was worried about Moonlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried about my mom because she was sick and I told her that she would be all right.



Akio's Comments:

I liked the story because that is how my parents are.


Jessica, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the man was going trick the women with a goat's heart.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I would try to help them and talk to them and ask them what was wrong.



Jessica's Comments:

I like the story because it was touching, caring.


calvin, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

1.When the King was worried about Sunlight. 2.When Moonlight was worried about Khan. 3.The father was worried about Moonlight and Sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried about my uncle one day when he was sick in the hospital for a long time.



calvin's Comments:

The story was very nice.


Shereva, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the queen told the king that she wanted his son and he cared so much about her he was going to do that. Another thing is the bears their conversation about humans. And the others I had forgotten about sorry?!!

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I prayed for them and talked to them so they would understand that I really cared about them.



Shereva's Comments:

Yeah, I really like the story because it teaches people in everyday life to cherish and love everyone not to be wicked and mean.


Jessie, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the princess told her father to let sunlight go. When moonlight told his brother that his father was going to try to him. When sunlight told moonlight to stay so he wouldn't get hurt.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Yesterday morning a boy was walking in the road and I told him to get out of the road.



Jessie's Comments:

I thought the story was good.


sasha, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

One time when then Khan was sick and he said that he would kill his son to save his wife but he didn't kill his son he killed the goat because he cared for the both of them. A second time when Moonlight and Sunlight ran away because Moonlight warned Sunli

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my brother was sick I put the TV in his room and brought him something to drink.



sasha's Comments:

The story was all right but it was just too long.


crystal, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Moonligt cared for his stepmother when she was sick even though she was faking. The man also cared for his wife. Last but not least, when Sunlight cared for Moonlight and her father.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

The time I was worried about somebody else was when my mother was in the hospital when she was sick and I was there for her when she couldn't get around very well.



crystal's Comments:

Dear Whootie, I thought the story was very interesting because it explains a specific thing that some people may or may not understand.


Christy, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the princess and Sunlight were in the dungeon and they had a conversation, the bears cared about the youngsters' lives, and when the two of them got married.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Well, one day my little brother was playing in the yard,and I thought that a car would hit him; so,I made him go in the house.



Christy's Comments:

I liked the stories, because it was heartwarming.


April, age 10

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

1.The hermit who took Sunlight and Moonlight in. 2.The princess when she asked her father to release Sunlight. 3.The bears who released Sunlight and the princess.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my mom with dishes when she was very busy. I warned my brother to be careful when I was worried about him getting hurt while playing with his toys.



April's Comments:

I thought the story was bad when the queen was asking the Khan to his son. It was a good ending when the princess married Sunlight and the boys found their father.


Sharcar, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The king cared about his son sunlight and his other son and the other king cared about the other king.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My mom was worried about me when I got off at the wrong bus stop and then I went over to my granddaddy's house and my sister told my mother and then she came and got me.



Sharcar's Comments:

I thought that the story was beautiful whootie i just can't said it was good and beautiful.


Romeo, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Sunlight was going to be killed. When someone got married. When they were in the dungeon.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

One time I didn't know where my mother was, so I called around looking for her.



Romeo's Comments:

I thought the story was good and interesting.


Cochina, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The Queen cared for Sunlight when his father died because she didn't want anything to happen to Sunlight. The Queen wasn't going to leave Sunlight alone and his father died. The Queen said she wanted to have Sunlight killed.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I would go help them until that person died. I would go cut the yard, rake the leaves, and ride my bike to the grocery store.



Cochina's Comments:

I thought the story was going to be a sad story.


Richard, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Moonlight, Sunlight and

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My brother was sick, and I had to stay home with me.



Richard's Comments:

It was not good or bad. I like the story a little bit.


Brittney, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

He didn't want his brother kill.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Ran away so he would not get killed.



Brittney's Comments:

I didn't like it becuse it was born.


Domenicka, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

He cried when he said my life shall be your life and we shall be together forever. WHEN THE STEP-BROTHER CARED ABOUT HIS BROHER WHEN SUNLIGHT CARED ABOUT THE PRINCESS WHEN THE KHAY CARED ABOUT THE SON His dad cared about

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I said not to ever tell me to do something for you and to never ask me for anything but I felt very sad when I said it but the person I said it to said she did not care. It was my sister and sometimes we always get into it. WHEN MY FRIEND BIKE WERE GONE



Domenicka's Comments:

I thought the story was so fantastic and Whootie, I wish to read more of your stories. that's a cute little name too. I THOUGHT THE STORY WAS GOOD AND NICE I really liked the story because it sounded pretty good for a little story. I really liked the s


fred, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

WHEN THE STEP-BROTHER CARED ABOUT HIS BROTHER. WHEN SUNLIGHT CARED ABOUT THE PRINCESS WHEN THE KHAY CARED ABOUT THE SON

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

WHEN MY FRIEND'S BIKE WAS GOING TO GET STOLEN AND I TOOK IT.



fred's Comments:

I THOUGHT THE STORY WAS GOOD AND NICE.


Qwantisha, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight's brother was about to die. When the hermit cared about the brother. When sunlight's dad said sunlight meant more than his life.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Captain pick up one boy and left the other.



Qwantisha's Comments:

I think it was great.


Sherry, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

His dad cared about his son. The evil stepmother wanted sunlight killed. Sunlight would rather die than let Moonlight die.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my nephew didn't like this dog and it chased him, I picked him up and took him in the house.



Sherry's Comments:

I really liked the story because it sounded pretty good for a little story.


Gabriel, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The Oueen tried to Sunlight, and then the father said that he cared more about his own son than his own life. When the hermit cared.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my little neice was in a body cast from the car wreck that happened to her.



Gabriel's Comments:

Whootie, I thought the story was very interesting about Sunlight and the queen the hermit and the father and the other characters.


Tyrell, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

His brother cared about Sunlight. His dad cared about Sunlight. And the old man cared about him.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I went to go help them.



Tyrell's Comments:

It was fun.


surkevia, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the king said that he will die for his son. When sunlight said you are too pretty to die. When the soldier cried for his brother.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was so worried I bought my mom a lot of stuff to show her I cared about her feelings I love my mom a lot.



surkevia's Comments:

I thought this story was good you should put another story on the internet.


X-ZAVIANA, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

WHEN THE WICKED QUEEN WANTED SUNLIGHT KILLED, BUT THE KING SAID, "NO I CARE MORE ABOUT MY SON THAN YOU." WHEN SUNLIGHT SAID HE DIDN'T MIND DYING BECAUSE HE WAS A STRANGER AND THEN THE PRINCESS SAID SHE WOULDN'T MIND DYING BUT SUNLIGHT TOLD HER THAT SHE W

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

GAVE THEM A PENCIL.



X-ZAVIANA's Comments:

I THINK THIS STORY WAS BEAUTIFUL BECAUSE THE WAY YOU MADE IT WAS WONDERFUL IT HAD A LOT OF COURTESY IN IT.


Porshia, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

His dad cared about his sons. The evil stepmother wanted sunlight killed for sunlight's dad. The way sunlight was looking at the king oldest daugher.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried about when sunlight tried to save his brother.



Porshia's Comments:

I liked it.


Antnoio, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the wicked queen told the king she wanted the blood from the king's son's heart and the king said he loved his sons more than he loved his life? When the hermit said that he did not have any sons of his. When sunlight said that you are going to take

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When the boy said that he wanted to go with him.



Antnoio's Comments:

I thought it was good. I enjoyed it and some parts were sad.


Braxton, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Moonlight wanted to go with Sunlight. When Sunlight lied and told the soldiers that Moonlight had died. When the bears let them live. ok

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I let him borrow my book.



Braxton's Comments:

It was good.


wendy, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The khan daughter cared about the two boys.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I called the police for them.



wendy's Comments:



Quinisha, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight cared about his brother. The king cared about his dear son. When the old man let them hide in the house.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?




Quinisha's Comments:



nicholas, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

1. When moonlight told sunlight what khan was going to do. 2. When the old man let them hide in his house. 3. When the princess tried to take up for sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my friend got in trouble, I took up for him.



nicholas's Comments:

I liked it because it was exiting and it kept me thinking.


Roy, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The king cared about his son. Sunlight cared about the princess. The bears cared about the strangers.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my nephew fell and cut his eye.



Roy's Comments:

I liked the story because it was funny.


terry, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The bears cared for them. They cared about each other.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I will do nothing to help them.



terry's Comments:

I did not like the story at all.


lamar, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The king cared more about the queen than his two sons. The queen liked sunlight. The bear cared about moonlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I cleaned up their yard.



lamar's Comments:

I thought whootie was an ok story.


Lashanda, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The king cared more about the queen than his two sons. The queen liked sunlight than moonlight. The bears care a lot about sunlight and moonlight both.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When the people try to take the two kids away.



Lashanda's Comments:

I like the story becase it was an interesting story and it was funny.


Precious, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight overheard the king and the queen talking about drinking Moonlight's blood. The princess felt sorry for Sunlight and begged him not to send him to the caves of the demon bears. The bears overheard the princess and Sunlight talking and they start

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my cousin got in trouble at school, I told her mother not to whip her.



Precious's Comments:

I thought it was very interesting because the people in the story cared about each other.


johnathan, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The bears cared and the father cared about them, too. The mother didn't care about them, too.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I will call 911.



johnathan's Comments:

It was good and action was in it. I like the story a lot.


Amber, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the bears cared about their father. When their mother cared about them. When they cared about each other.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Ask them what happened and take them to their apartment.



Amber's Comments:

Whootie Owl, I think your story was good.


Derrick, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.


Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I went to their house and asked them how where they doing.



Derrick's Comments:

I did not like the story because it was not interesting.


Corey, age 15

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Moonlight said he'd die for the princess. The hermit cared for sunlight. When the king cared for the queen.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my brother gave me some money.



Corey's Comments:

I thought the story was great because it was a fairy tale.


Chaquita, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the got put in the cave. I don't remember anything else.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I remember the time when my brother needed a hair cut and I gave him my last three dollars.



Chaquita's Comments:

I thought the story was very interesting. It really touched my heart.


Jermit, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The princess cared about Sunlight. Sunlight told a lie so the soldier would go back and get his brother. Moonlight told his brother what his father was planning on doing to him.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My little brother was going on a trip with a lot of high school boys. And I worried that something bad might happen to him because he didn't have any peers to talk to.



Jermit's Comments:

It was very interesting.


Tajuana, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Moonlight cared for his brother a lot, he went to go tell sunlight that a goat was going to him.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I help my sister all the time when we are cleaning up and I help her.



Tajuana's Comments:

I liked the story it was very interesting.


kendra, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Moonlight cared for sunlght. The bears cared for the princess and sunlight cared for the princess.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I worried about an aunt and I helped her do things around the house.



kendra's Comments:

Well, Whootie I thought it was a great story. It was interesting.


Sedric, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The bears cared for the strangers in the dungeons. When the two kids were on there own.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I rode my bike to ride them home.



Sedric's Comments:

I thought the story was a caring story because someone should always help someone.


Latrice, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When they escaped from home and one brother let the other go and he went back.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I would not be mad at them at all because they are my friends.



Latrice's Comments:

I think that the story was real nice cause I would read a book about those kinds of books.


GAINES, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The bear cared for the princes and the stranger.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I gave my friend some money for lunch because he did not have any money.



GAINES's Comments:

It was a good story and the whole class liked it.


laventrice, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When he went to get help for his brother. When he told the soilder his brother had died so they couldn't go back and get him. When the bears decided not to eat the two because of how unselfish they were.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my mother had taken too many pills, I had to call 911 and make sure she was still awake till they came.



laventrice's Comments:

I thought it was a great story. The way they showed how much each one loved each other was real sweet.


Lacye, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight took up for Moonlight. Sumlight tried to comfort the princess when they were in the sacks. The hermit let them live with them since they were stranded.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

One of my friends was going through a family and I tried to make her feel better by giving her words of comfort.



Lacye's Comments:

I loved the story because it had a lot of meanings and feelings to things that happen in my life.


James, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The bears cared for the princess and the stranger. Sunlight cared for Moonlight in the desert. And the old hermit cared for Sunlight and Moonlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried about my brother so I helped him with his homework.



James's Comments:

I thought the story was very heart-warming and very good because there were a lot of times when the characters cared for another.


Tashieka, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

1.When Sunlight cared for Moonlight in the dessert. 2.When the bears cared for the stangers. 3. The king offered the hermit a job.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

1. When my friend need some money for something. 2. When my little sister needed help on her homework. 3. When my cousin hurt herself and I cheered her up.



Tashieka's Comments:

It was a very good story to read and the part I liked was when the bears didn't eat them.


Rodney, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Sunlight told the captain that moonlight had died. When the bears didn't eat Sunlight and the princess. And when Sunlight's father told his wife that he would sunlight but he tricked her.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I let my cousin cry on my shoulder when she found out her father had just died.



Rodney's Comments:

I didn't like it that much because it didn't really catch my attention.


Misseylove, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When sunlight told the captain that moonlight had died. The bears didn't eat sunlight and the king's daughter. When sunlight's dad helped his wife by giving her cows blood if she was real sick.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I gave my 40 cent to get lunch.



Misseylove's Comments:

I like the part when he didn't kill his son.


Andre, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Moonlight cared for Sunlight's life. When the bears cared for the Princess and Moonlight. When the Khan cared for Sunlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When my Grandfather died I helped my brother to come to a calm place.



Andre's Comments:

I think the story is a really good. I like the way the story told you what the people were thinking.


Latoya, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight loved the princess so much that he was willing to his son in order for the princess to live. The Hermit helped the two boys hide until the men started looking for them. The bears saved the boys.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried that my friend would be caught in a lie so I told her mom that she wasn't by herself,to make her feel good.



Latoya's Comments:

I liked the story cause it is a good story to read if you're bored.


Courtney, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the father of the boys was going to give the queen from the mule to save his son and make his queen feel better. When the bears let both of them go without hurting them. When Sunlight jumped out of his bag and stopped the soldier from cutting t

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Yes? I gave her $.50 so she wouldn't have to go to the office.



Courtney's Comments:

I liked it a lot because you never knew what they where going to do.


jarvis, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The bear's and the boy's.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried about my mom. I prayed for her.



jarvis's Comments:

I thought it was very good and careful.


BJ, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the princess asked her father to release the stranger he threw her in the dungeon.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?




BJ's Comments:



Greg, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When they were in the cave. The king was going to the goat and give the heart to the queen.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My sister was drowning and I helped her.



Greg's Comments:



Shuquita, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The two bears in the story. The old man. And the khan.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I started to study and brought my grades up.



Shuquita's Comments:

I thought that it was a good story because I liked when the bear let them free.


Jeremy, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When they were in the cave.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I would have cleaned up for them.



Jeremy's Comments:

I thought the story was good.


Aylissa, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

They daddy cared for everything even his son. His new wife said she was sick and he didn't believe what she said. Then she said she will have to drink his son's . She just wanted his son ed.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I like it the story.



Aylissa's Comments:

I thought her guards were going to her son.


Tonniece, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Sunlight and Moonlight cared for each other. Sunlight and Moonlight's father cared for each other. Sunlight and the princess cared for each other.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I saved money and to up money for that person.



Tonniece's Comments:

I loved it because it so . It makes you want to keep reading until you get finished.


jamila, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

There was somebody that cared about is Sunlight, Moonlight and Sunlight's dad.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I had said to them to leave them alone they are my friend and if they try to run away I will try to stop them.



jamila's Comments:

MR.Whootie Owl your story was great because the story lots of things to laugh about.


michael, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Moonlight told Sunlight that they were going to give his heart to the queen.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When someone tried to fight my friend then I told him that someone was tring to fight you.



michael's Comments:

I liked the story because friends looked out for each other.


michael, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

In the first part of the story where they left and when the nomad cared and when they were scared. to the beards.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my friend rake the yard.



michael's Comments:

It was a good story I mean it.


Lashaunda, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The bears cared about them. The hermit cared about them. The princess cared about them.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

My mother and I gave a woman that we thought was our friend. We gave her and her kids some food.



Lashaunda's Comments:

I thought it was a good story. It reminded me of Snow White.


HOLLY, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Moonlightand sunlight and mom and father.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was doing something for my mom and dad and I love them and they gave me some



HOLLY's Comments:

I was listening to the story and I ENJOYED IT.


latara, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the bears were talking to the s and when they where going to trick her by geting a goat's heart and when the tried to help moonlight.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Someone fell off their bike and I helped her get up and walked her home.



latara's Comments:

I thought it was great because it was interesting.


Mario, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

Moonlight and Sunlight were good in the story. Moonlight was the great person.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my mother to buy B.C and she back good agone.



Mario's Comments:

Whootie Owl I thought It was good. It was good because it's almost like the seven dwarfs.


Cedric, age 11

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When the princess asked her father to release the strange boy. When the bear's freed the princess and her brother. When the Khan said he would give the queen his son's .

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I had given the answers to a test when they needed them.



Cedric's Comments:

I thought that the story was great that the King and his two sons lived happily ever after.


Ebony, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

When Moonlight's stepbrother told him he was going to run away with him. And when one of the brothers passed out, one of them went and got help. And Moonlight jumped out and helped the old man from getting hit across the head.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I gave my cousin some helpful advice.



Ebony's Comments:

Dear Whootie, I thought that it was dramatic. And it was very helpful to me. It helped me think about some things.


Clifton m Clayton.M, age 12

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The first time someone cared about someone was when the king cared about the evil queen. The second time someone cared about someone was when the princess saw the Kahn's troops with Sunlight. The final time when someone cared about someone was when the be

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

When I was worried about someone was when my little cousin ran into the road and almost got hit. When I was worried about someone is when my step-mom had cancer, and she almost died.



Clifton m Clayton.M's Comments:

I think that the story was good.


diangelo S, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The old man cared about the two boys. The princess cared more for this upstart stranger. They wanted to care about them because they cared for them.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped my grandma out when she was sick. I was worried about my mom I didn't know where she was. I'll be thinking about them.



diangelo S's Comments:

I want to be lazy because I don't like to do anything.


TYRONE, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The brothers cared about each other. The daddy caring about his wife and son. The prince and princess.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Playing football and watching it.



TYRONE's Comments:

It was ok but not that funny.


shameka, age 13

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

There were the brothers who cared for each other. When the man came to get them and the man told him that there are no boys here and he cared for them because he didn't want them to get hurt.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I was worried about my grandma when she had a stroke and she couldn't wake up.



shameka's Comments:

I thought the story was wonderful and the drawings where neat and cool and they mached well with the story.


Eric, age 15

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The brother cared about each other. The hemit cared about three brother. The king cared about his wicked wife.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

Yes, when my grandaddy was sick I took care of him.



Eric's Comments:

It was sad that the Queen what her step son


Stacy, age 14

Find three times in the story when someone cared about someone else.

The brother cared about each other. The hermit cared about the three brothers. The king cared about the wicked wife.

Think of a time when you were worried about someone else and did something to help them. What did you do?

I helped cheer them up. I helped sick people. I cleaned their yard up.



Stacy's Comments:

It was good and I enjoyed the story.



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