What other kids said about "The Magic Tree Trunks"

(Note: Kids' spelling & grammar has been corrected)


Shauna LAM, age 9

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

no

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

yes

Shauna LAM's Comments:

good


jimmie, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

yes

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

yes and no

jimmie's Comments:

it was good


johnny, age foy

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

yes

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

maybe

johnny's Comments:

i thought it was interesting and amazing and funny


Chelsea, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yeah sure, I mean it was Blavue's fault.

Chelsea's Comments:

Nice.


Grace, age 9

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped her because sooner or later they would find out.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

One time someone took something that I told them not to take and they took it any way. I told my Mom and she told the person to put it back. She said sorry and I forgave her.

Grace's Comments:

I thought it was a very good fairytale story. It's very forgiving.


ashmal, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I would, I guess.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

I don't always.

ashmal's Comments:

It was intresting.


nikole, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes...because she needs our help....and I feel so sorry for her...

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

No...because nobody has ever done anything bad to me...

nikole's Comments:

THE STORY WAS GREAT!!!!!! It was soooo interesting and exciting...!!! I liked the part where they were in Greece...


aideen, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I would ask for the full story first and when I was sure she was telling the truth, I would help her.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

Yes, when my friend ganged up on me I forgave her because she was really sorry.

aideen's Comments:

It was a good story but not very original. I give it 7/10.


Eimear, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes...because she is my stepsister...and she needs our help...

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

No...because i can't remember.

Eimear's Comments:

The story was brilliant, it was exciting...


niamh and vivienne, age 11 and 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would because she would have been my sister and because it was her mam doing the stuff to her but the lady turned out not to be her mam.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

Yes, a man ran over me with his bike and I had to go to the hospital.

niamh and vivienne's Comments:

It was ok, a bit long, but I liked it. If I had to give it a score out of ten I would give it six out of ten.


millicent, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

No.

millicent's Comments:

I thought it was really intresting.


eunice, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped Lineink.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

I would have forgiven them.

eunice's Comments:

I really liked the story.


francesca, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped her because she had done noyhing bad and was only afraid.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

When my brother broke my stereo I thought I would have never forgive him since I had got it off my nana for my birthday.

francesca's Comments:

I thought it was a bit boring and that it could have been a bit better. I'd give it 4 out of 10.


Eimear, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes...because she is my stepsister...and she needs are help...

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

No...because I can't remember.

Eimear's Comments:

The story was brilliant...it was exciting...


laura, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I would because if I didn't she could be killed for lying and it wasn't even her fault - it was her mom's.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

A girl in my class and I once were always fighting and we wouldn't talk to each other so we both decided that we would both be friends and that's it, really.

laura's Comments:

It wasn't the the worst but it wasn't good. It could have done better. I would give 5 out of 10 because it was kind of boring but it had a good plan behind it.


casey, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

No, I would not even think about it.

casey's Comments:

I did not like it at all.


aimeechristine, age 1111

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, because she needed help.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

Yes, my friend pulled my hair and I fell.

aimeechristine's Comments:

The story was interesting and had a lot of character.


ramona, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes .

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

Yes friendship, fighting.

ramona's Comments:

It was fine to me,


hakim, age 9

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Not if she banished me.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell Whootie Owl what happened.

Yes. He pushed me and we started fighting.

hakim's Comments:

I liked the story and it teaches a lesson.


Cyndy, age 34

Cyndy's Comments:

I think this site is wonderful. I help coordinate childrens events at Pagan festivals. I have been able to find stories here that are true to the tales told by the elders. I HIGHLY recomend this site to ANY educator!


Lisa, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

In my mind, I would have still helped her. This is because her mother was the ruler of all her movements and actions. I also know the greatest commandment which is saying just because a person did something to you that does not mean you should do somethin

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

I have forgiven my friends for several tricks they have pullled on me. One trick was to throw an ice cold bucket of water over my head when I come through the door. In time they apologized and I accepted with open arms.

Lisa's Comments:

I believe this was a well written book. In time you understand the meaning of life through good and evil. So this is a story I would recommend to my friends.


Gary, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes. I would have helped him because he sounds like a nice person.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. I forgave one of my friends for hitting my glasses off my face. I know that it was a mistake. And he did not mean to do it.

Gary's Comments:

I loved this story a whole lot. It had to do with kings and lords and other people that come from a time of myth and lengeds.


Kiran, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I wouldn't, no, because in that situation I don't know the girl very much and I wouldn't know what to do.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, when my brother took a scissor and through it and I was bleeding on my head it wasn't feeling good but I forgave him.

Kiran's Comments:

I thought that the story was very good and it brought sadness and happiness to other people.


Kajal, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would help Lineik because her mother made Lineik lie.


Jasmine, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped Lineik.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes I forgived someone who did something bad. I forgived one of my friends because they had took something from me.

Jasmine's Comments:

I thought this story was a very good story.


Stefanie, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped Lineik. Especially, when she was crying. That's what friends are for.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

I forgave a friend that hurt my feelings. She didn't mean to, she was joking around.

Stefanie's Comments:

It was a good story, a little confusing at first, though. When I continued to read it, I got into it.


Kajal, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes. I would have helped Lineik because her mother made Lineik lie that she was her real mother. That was not Lineik's fault.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. When I was roller-blading and my friend and I were playing defense and she made me trip and fall.

Kajal's Comments:

I thought that this story was fun and it is an adventure! It is a great story!!


Robert, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No.

Robert's Comments:

Long, but exciting.


zach, age 8

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

YES, I did forgive a person for their actions. When my mom did not take me to a birthday.



zach's Comments:

That it is very good.


JP, age 8

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I might have asked for something in return. But I'd probably still do it.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

I forgave my friend for lying.



JP's Comments:

I think it was good I liked it 55%.


, age

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes.



's Comments:

Loved it.


Danielle, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

NO

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

NO SHE LIED TO ME



Danielle's Comments:



Jaesika, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?


Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, because I felt bad.



Jaesika's Comments:

I thought it was good, but when I was in second grade I wrote my own story about a candy land where it rained candy it was a pretty good book. Jaesika Nelson


SEAN, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

NO, I WOULD HAVE LET THE PRINCE COME BACK TO FIND OUT THAT SHE HAD NOT MADE ANYTHING AND THEN SHE WOULD HAVE TO EXPLAIN HERSELF. BUT I WOULDN'T HAVE WANTED HER KILLED.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

YES, THIS BOY IN MY CLASS WOULD ALWAYS DO BAD THINGS AND THEN TELL THE TEACHER THAT IT WAS ME. ONE DAY HE GOT CAUGHT.



SEAN's Comments:

THIS WAS A VERY GOOD STORY.


Simon, age 5

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. My friend poked me in the eye.



Simon's Comments:



Rylee, age 9

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes.



Rylee's Comments:

I thought it was nice.


Brian, age 9

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, I found out it was an accident.



Brian's Comments:

I liked how she helped with the dress. But she didn't need to.


Hank, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No!! I wanted her to suffer.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. They called me a name.



Hank's Comments:

It was the best story I've ever heard!!!


Jesse, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, because she was nice and kind.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes I have, before someone said bad things behind my back.



Jesse's Comments:

It was awesome.


Amber Pro, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I probably would have because I'm the nice type.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Well, my friend once told the boy I liked that I liked him. I didn't want to tell him. But I forgave her.



Amber Pro's Comments:

I liked the story very much. It was funny, suspenseful, and well organized. I think that it should be published into a book. The fact that it was a Fairy Tale made the story even better. Sincerely, Amber


Kristen, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, Because I would feel sorry for her.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. My sister made me break my foot.



Kristen's Comments:

I liked the story. It was cool.


Johnny, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No, because she lied and I would want her to suffer.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, when my friend said a joke that offended me.



Johnny's Comments:

The story was long and great and it made me want to read more.


ELizabeth, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No, because she was so mean to her.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, one time my brother threw a Barbie at me. I forgave him because you can't be mad at someone forever.



ELizabeth's Comments:

I thought it was a very good story and long but that's OK!


Angel, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I would not because she was so mean to her.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, because they are my friends.



Angel's Comments:

I though it was very cool, long, but cool.


Lori, age 13

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped Lineik.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, my friend tried to take my best friend while I was hanging out with her.



Lori's Comments:

I thought it was pretty cool and I liked the s.


Tatianna, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

If I was Pricess Sophie I would have told her to lose her magic and be a better queen.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

No, because they would be mean.



Tatianna's Comments:

I like it, it tells you what it is about.


KEVIN/CLINT, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, because it was not her that did all of the bad things it was her mother.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. Someone smashed my finger in a door, they said they were sorry, begged for forgiveness and I forgave them.



KEVIN/CLINT's Comments:

I thought the story was long, but it was very well done.


Jeremy, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, because it was not her it was her mother.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, someone cut my finger with a knife while I was asleep.



Jeremy's Comments:

I thought that it was a long story, and I thought it was very well done.


Anna, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Once, my brother lost my best video game. I got so mad. I wanted to take something of his. My mom got us to be friends with each other.



Anna's Comments:

I liked the story.


Kristina, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No! Because she is a sneaky rat like her mother.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes and he hit me and he said sorry.



Kristina's Comments:

I think it was a good story.


Maggie, age 9

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped Lineik because she was not the one who came up with her pretending to be Princess Sophie it was her mother's.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. My friend pulled me down the slide and hurt my leg.



Maggie's Comments:

I thought that this was a good story. It was a very interesting one.


Mei Lin, Lara, age 9,10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Mei Lin: No I wouldn't. Lara: I wouldn't, too.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Mei Lin: Yes once my brother slapped me on my thigh and it really hurt!!! Lara: I forgave my sister when she kicked me off the computer.



Mei Lin, Lara's Comments:

Mei Lin and Lara: We thought it was pretty good and we could tell it was made up of different fairy tales.


Matthew, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

NO. I would never help Lineik.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

I forgave Jim for throwing a stick at my friend Stephanie Bear.



Matthew's Comments:

I think it was good but a bit long.


Blake and Dejan, age 9 and 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No, I wouldn't help her because she was mean to the king.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, Dale and Ryan are always mean to me but I forgave them.



Blake and Dejan's Comments:

It was very interesting and good, actually fantastic and scary.


Lovie, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would have helped her.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

No Because she cheated me of our friendship.



Lovie's Comments:



lucas, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No, she should have told the truth.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, but if it's bad enough they need to do something good for you.



lucas's Comments:

The story I thought was very good, interesting, but good.


tony, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes I would.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, I fought my friend.



tony's Comments:

It was verry good.


chelsea, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes I would.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

The person started calling me bad names, but I forgave them.



chelsea's Comments:

I thought it was a good story because it had a happy ending.


Jerry, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I would have helped her because I would have felt sorry for her.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, Somebody blamed me for doing something and I didn't do it.



Jerry's Comments:

The story was great.


JACOB, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would help Lineik.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

One day a kid lied to me and I forgave him.



JACOB's Comments:

I thought it was a hoot.


tony, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

No.



tony's Comments:

It was cool.


Brittany, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, because they called me names.



Brittany's Comments:

The happy ending.


Emily and christine, age 10 ,11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, we would help Lineik. We felt sorry for Lineik.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, we both said something bad to someone.



Emily and christine's Comments:

It was very good.


Anthony, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I would jump out of the tree trunk and say who I am.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, I think I did.



Anthony's Comments:

I think the story was OK.


Carrie, age 7

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Probably! I think that all in all she was a wonderful person just ruled by what she was afraid of, like many people in this world.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

After time! When my sister and I have squabbles. We forgive each other in the end though.



Carrie's Comments:

I thought that it was magnificent and very well outlined. The plot couldn't have been better. The only thing missing is details. The story ended too fast. It went from climax to end without a grand finale.


, age

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would help Lineik.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

No, I won't forgive someone.



's Comments:

I thought it was cool.


nathan, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes. I would have known.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, many times.



nathan's Comments:

Good and bad.


heather, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, I would.



heather's Comments:

I liked the story.


Jon, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes .



Jon's Comments:

It was perfect.


adam/kory, age 11/10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I would not help her because she helped Blauvor.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.





Louis, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.




Louis's Comments:



chantel, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No, I wouldn't help Lineik because she was in it with her stepmother.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

No, I did not forgive a friend for giving a boy my number.



chantel's Comments:

I thought the story was a good because it was really interesting, and the author had good ideas.


shantal, age 7

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

I think I would help them.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

My sister was cleaning the bathroom and used my toothbrush to clean the floors, toilet, and sink. It was my favorite BARNEY toothbrush. She had to buy me a new Barney toothbrush.



shantal's Comments:

It was really cool! Please write another one and send it to my e-mail address! Do you like Barney?


Ashley,Amber, age 10,10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, we would.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

NO! Nothing happened.



Ashley,Amber's Comments:

It was OK. It was also a little too long. Sorry. Ashley and Amber


Alexis, age 11

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

No, I wouldn't because she was pretending to be someone she wasn't.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, my cousin threw rocks at me and I started to bleed! But I forgave him because he's still my cousin.



Alexis's Comments:

I thought it was a good story. Great word choice!


Tonya, age 12

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Tonya says, Yes!

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, because they messed up my bed.



Tonya's Comments:

I love it.


Jenna, age 22

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, Lineik shouldn't pay for the sins of her Mother.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Some kids teased me when I was in school, but I have since forgiven them.



Jenna's Comments:

It was very long, but just as sweet!


Tiffany, age 13

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, because it would be the right thing to do.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes, my friend got mad at me and she told everybody that I liked this GROSS guy.



Tiffany's Comments:

I LOVED IT!!!!!!! I love to read and I thought it was awesome!!!!


tania, age 9

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes, I would.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes. We were building a treehouse and someone dumped paint on us.



tania's Comments:

We thought it was good.


Shannon, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

Yes.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Yes! my friend took my poke'mon cards. I caught her & she gave them back.



Shannon's Comments:

I liked it, but it was too long!


Reiley, age 10

If you were Prince Siguard or Princess Sophie hiding in the tree trunks, would you have helped Lineik?

(I would have been princess Sophie) Yes..... It has always been easy to forgive others. As in the Lords Prayer and in the 10 comandments.. Yes, I would have.

Did you ever forgive someone who did a bad thing? Tell what happened.

Well, me and my friend Alexa once got into a bad disagreemant.... She thought I was wrong while I had the same thought.... I sent her a note that begged her to forgive me. And she did, now we are very happy.



Reiley's Comments:

I loved it!!!!! I liked Princess Sophie best!! She was kind and loving....If I were a prince I would like her!!!! (I'm NOT a guy!!!)



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